Thursday, February 10, 2011
The First Draft Of My Documentary
DOCUMENTARY from lydia earl on Vimeo.
I have shown a few people this documentary and they have given me some advice on what they think. I have changed it to make the documentary as it is now. But i plan to make a questionnaire and ask a few more people on any changes they think I should do.
I have now added a final piece to my documentary, so this isn't the final draft.
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Wow!! I was actually very apprehensive before watching this because I think the whole subject around anorexia is very graphic and emotional but throughout the documentary I was totally engrossed by the way that you have approached the subject. The music that you have used is subtle in parts when need be and very dominate in others which I think you have timed to perfection. The use of the comic elements between serious interviews creates a very overwhelming impact upon myself as a consumer i was laughing at the jokes but then the straight and quick cuts to the seriousness of the interview made me feel guilty about laughing at such a serious matter which then made me pay more attention the the facts and figures as well as the real life story of the young girl with anorexia. Overall if there was one criticism i think that it ends very abruptly with no credits but overall i think it is a truly exceptional piece approached with the upmost maturity considering the subject that is focused upon. :) well done truly inspirational
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